This is okay, it is clear to the reader of your blog what kind of film you are going to make and what happens in the opening.
However, it might have been so much clearer if you had of also used a voiceover to describe the different scenes and some drawn visuals to help the reader picture what is going to happen.
This is okay, it is clear to the reader of your blog what kind of film you are going to make and what happens in the opening.
ReplyDeleteHowever, it might have been so much clearer if you had of also used a voiceover to describe the different scenes and some drawn visuals to help the reader picture what is going to happen.